i am just graduating highschool and this is my newest short film so please leave a comment on it, maybe including the editing and cinematography.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yMHS_UUG3Ys

hey dude, we're just alike, too bad we live across the country.

This sort of film just isn't my cup of tea. I mean, the basic story was "Girls does drugs, does more drugs, does more drugs, does more drugs, then everything falls to ****."

I think if you're going to make a movie about drugs, it's important - no, it's critical that you make them real people with real problems rather than vessels for the drugs.

I liked the look of the film, I enjoyed the editing, especially the blue 360 shot. As far as cinematography goes, at times you cut off people's heads, or had the camera in a weird place where I couldn't really see what was going on. I like the handheld style, but I know from experience that it's extremely difficult to do. One tip is to remember what your subject is - what is the audience supposed to be looking at? - and always keep your eye on that.

Keep it up, though, it looks like you have some great films ahead of you! Practice makes perfect.