Hi guys.

Ive just posted a couple of my short scripts on my new homepage and I would really like some feedback.

Who knows, one of you might even want to make one of them!

Anyway, I know we're not supposed to post links but its only a personal homepage and its the only way i can point you to my scripts! So I do hope the administrators have mercy!

Anyway, please check them out and drop me an email with some feedback. I really would love to hear from any of you. Especially if you want to film one of them!

Steve

Homepage is at: http://www.scenetoscreen.com

Posting links to personal webpages isn't too much of a problem anymore.

I did delete the double post however.

Welcome to the site!

Best Regards,
Chris Wright
Studentfilms.com

I read "Turn Turtle" and I must say I wasn't expecting to like it, but it was really good.
I didn't understand why certain characters responded the way they did, but another run through would probably clear that up.

Only one suggestion... When you write as a writer, you generally leave most of the shots up to the director or dop, and some of the shots that you threw in there sort of seemed redundant.
Excellent story. I could picture it perfectly.

hi there.. i'm a film--maker from india.. suhrud godbole (thats my name!) anyways, i'm pretty new to this site, and dont know the people around, or even the way around here... would love to hear from you. i have some things up my sleeves...i'd like to have a healthy interaction with someone decently intelligent...

hey Suhrud! Welcome! It's really neat to have people from all over the world here!

and Steve - great job on Turn Turtle! I really liked it. As said above, it is standard to leave shots up to the Director, but don't worry about it, just keep it in mind for future reference.

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i'd like to have a healthy interaction with someone decently intelligent...

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Well, I guess that leaves me out!

Greetings from North Carolina, Suhrud! You'll find all ranges of intelligence here and I think I learn something from all of them!

Good luck.