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this is my first movie i made a month ago, i want to go to film school after highschool soo please give me some criticism. it is acted and directed by me.

link:
http://www.zshare.net/video/knock-knock-wmv.html
 
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how come when i try clicking on the link the video plays in very small dimensions?


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That happened to me too. Maybe try uploading to a different site, or something. Like, say, this one. haha. (Although I can't really talk, my first film wasnt posted on here either...yet.)
It also seemed very dark, almost impossible to see what's going on. There's a fine line between creating a mood and blackness. Then again, most movies end up looking darker online, for whatever reason.
I'll confess I didnt finish it because of the size and darkness of the film, but what I saw seemed like the same old student horror film i've seen a million times. But hey, maybe it makes a turn I didnt see coming.


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ya it is quite small when i look at it, and i dont have the money to upload it to "student films" and ya it does have a quite twilight zone type ending, maybe i will try to make it bigger and post it again ok Smile
 
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yeah..
i have no experience with youtube.com but you just MIGHT be able to host it there....
wouldnt know for sure though....
i only watch videos from youtube.


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