I would like to introduce my new short film.
It's called "Nobody Else."
It is about a man wakes up in his car, notices something wrong with the entire city....

http://www.s-fiftyfour.com

Thank you.

It was okay. Photography was beautiful at times, and standard other times.

I didn't really...get it. Okay, so everyone's gone. It's a premise, not a story. I didn't get why he took off running at one point. And the end - he commits suicide? I didn't see the motivation.

Not that you asked for feedback, but I figured that's why you posted it.

Keep it up.

Yeah, nothing much really happened.

My suggestion is write a script before you film and then ask someone what they think of it. A script for this would've shown there isn't anything in the film and you could've made it better before shooting it.

I made a movie that was very similar to this. I had a few of the same problems; my movie doesnt really go anywhere either, but I feel like theres a bit more susbstance to it. If you watch it, I think you might get some ideas for how to take that idea and make it more of a story.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X5VeegLEfr0

Just my opinion. I liked a lot of the photography.

When he woke up he immediately knew he was alone. You should have taken your time with that. I also would have like to have seen more distress in the character before the end.

What was that shot on? It had great widescreen... anybody know?