I'm from Holland and I've seen some american commercials, so I wanted to do somethink like it.

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I hope you give a reply to my spoof commercial.
you also can reply on: bas640@hotmail.com

by the way, is it english, not in dutch

anyone?

what do you think?



it sound almost desperate, doesn't it?

why doesn't give me a reply?

Interesting concept. Just, it was long, drawn out, and dificult to understand at times. ... and to be brutally honest, the sarcasm wasn't funny. Most commercials are 30 seconds. I bet you could take the 90 second version you have and tighten it up to a good, fast paced, high energy 30 second spot with faster music and better graphics. But, that's just my opinion. Maybe others liked it better.

yeah, I put the my film on the forum from empire magezine, and most of the people there liked it, so that's good to hear. And more people not on that forum liked it. I respect people for their comment.

Any one else who want to comment on my short?

anyone else a comment on my spoof?

i saw the commerial...Well I have decided to show this to all my friends, it was hillarious! It was a true spoof! It made no sense and was really stupid but it was so unrealistic it was funny! I'm making a cereal commerial myself for school and you gave me some great ideas but then again I don't think I'll be hitting anyone over the head with a cereal box... Next time slow down the font just a little bit.

thnx for your reply, succes with your cerealmovie