Okay I wrote this in about a week. It was very on-the-spot. I would put it up here but I see no reason to put a 90+ page script on a thread. If you want to read it, go to triggerstreet.com Feel free to review it there or here. Please be honest. I plan on spending about 2 months on the rewriting process of this. Tell me everything [nongramatical] that you find incorrect, misleading, illogical, stupid, or whatever.

Avoid saying this is like that movie... it's supposed to be.

Pay attention to location and how it would be produced. I wrote it with more effort on the ability to be produced and less on plot/character develpment... it shows but that's what the rewrites are for... have fun

http://www.triggerstreet.com search screenplays "Fall of Night" or members "davisdirection"

Thanks guys.

- C. Davis
YELLOW HAMMER PRODUCTIONS