Hi, I've been a long time studentfilms.com viewer and I've been registered in this forum for a long time but I've barely posted.

Anyways, none of my short films are on the website but I did post one up on youtube.com. I was wondering if I can get any "stranger" feedback from it because all the feedback I've gotten are from my friends, and of course my film class.

http://www.youtube.com/?v=1JVyKFPOQKA

You can comment here on this forum, not on youtube PLEASE. thanks!

- Rei

p.s. I had to reduce the quality so i can upload it faster on youtube. Ignore the quality, just watch the story and tell me what you think about it overall. Thanks again.

This message has been edited. Last edited by: directoREi,

Hey. I just watched it. First off, the quality of movies on You Tube is never that great. Not holding that against you. The only real problem with this movie was your reliance of music, and no dialogue. Your sound levels didn't really do any fading in and out, it was just on and off between silence. Your camera work was great, and the "dream" parts were good, using black and white and having the white flash really helped. I especially liked how you had them fight in those sequences. Good movie.

I don't have time to watch it all now, but from what I saw, try looking up some techniques in shot composition. Most of your framing was dead center, which can get a little visually boring. Change it up a little.