This is an idea im still working on for a Music video... any suggestions of what i can add to it to make richer... its not a script just the 1st draft of the idea....thank you all for your help!!! Kal

EXT Desert Sunset:
Open shot in desert with sunset in the background, on music camera cranes up slowly then an SUV passes from under Driving into depth of desert road.
Various shots of the car and CU shots of driver driving the car shot of tires etc… drivers hand on window, other hand on steering wheel pov shots ect… we don’t reveal the driver.
CU on lips of driver starts to sing as he is driving then we reveal the driver singing during his singing P.O.V shot a sand storm appears in the forth ground as he is approaching it, he starts to slow down.
we see in the depth the car comes to halt driver gets out his SUV walking in amusement towards the circular sand storm as he comes close, it disappears and reappears behind him. He turns to see a beautiful woman’s face starting to come into shape he continues to sing looking at her face.
he reaches to touch her on the face she scatters into dust we see a piece of silk scarf falling to the ground she leaves behind for him he starts to kneel down to pick up the scarf. brings it close to him and smells it during this the camera starts to track in slowly to him to a C.U shot as he continues to sing in search of the girl he sees something the camera continues movement and turns 180 with him in frame over shoulder shot and camera tracks in a bit he is out of frame camera acts as P.O.V and starts to move towards another sand storm that appears in depth then the storm disappears camera stops singer walks into frame.
Singer is looking around and singing. He sees another sand storm appear close by. This time the storm looks more aggressive and a full woman’s body starts to appear.
Cut to:
C.U on singers face filled with happiness as he continues to sing. The woman is becoming clear to us camera tracks in to an E.C.U to her face we see her face coming to life with color.
C.U shot of singers face singing and taken away by her beauty. 2 shot woman walks in frame towards him starts to raise her hand towards his face and touches him. They come close to each other various shots of them and CU shots. Shots of singer alone in the desert singing and doing nice moves.
Shots of girl alone dancing and doing seductive but concervative moves.
Cut to:
They are both in the car driving in the desert they are exchanging looks he continues to sing to her various shots.
Cut To:
They are sitting on the front hood of the car as he still sings to her camera 180 around them
Continues…
he continues to sing to her she is silent in all the clip then from a two shot we start to track concertrating on sari with a sweet smile as he sings camera continues tracking in until he is out of frame the camera does 180 over his shoulder then camera cranes up to reveal that the singer is alone continues to sing as the words are finished as camera captures him on a he jumps of the hood of the car.
Cut to:
Shot of him gets in his SUV. Various interior shot of him climbing into his car. Turning it one accelerating.
Cut to:
C.U shot through the rear view mirror his eyes are in frame we zoom in on the mirror to see that something familiar is happening from the dust the car is creating.
Continues same shot one take:
We see the woman coming together from sand again at this time camera is Extreme cu through the mirror then suddenly camera is shooting from out of the car directly at her as if we went through the mirror to the back out of car directly filming her then camera dolly in through the girls face inside the sand storm reversed to show the women’s back camera cranes up and we see dust and SUV driving far far in the depth of the desert camera continues to crane up as we started the clip to end the clip.
The woman and car disappear leaving dust all over and in the air then the Credits are formed from the dust and get blown away by the wind one after the other.

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is this a music video? if it is it sounds cool...it would depend on the music

Well, hope you get the funding for all the extras (cranes, tracks,wind machine for blowing sands,etc etc)

I know you probably put a lot of time into typing that all out, but really it is so technical its hard to visualize what you are describing. I know this isn't really a "script" but it would be a lot easier to visualize if you described the action and put more focus on painting a picture with your words and took out all of the descriptions of camera angles and movement.

thank you all