Hey guys
This is Drew from raddrew productions. Heres the trailer to "Tears of August" The finished film should be finished early March.

http://members.cox.net/raddrew3/Tears%20Trailer.WMV for Trailer

www.raddrew.moonfruit.com for Site

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I used to live 10 minutes walking distance from those bluffs. Truly one of the most beautiful spots on the Earth.

Nice looking trailer, although a lot of it was too dark to tell what was going on. I was particularly fond of the end where you just let the sound of the birds ride out the title. Let us know when this is finished!

Nota "Wishes he could move back to San Diego" Mono

I watched the trailer, it was interesting...

The fight scene looked fake...gotta choreograph...

Cool stuff...

but I must say, the title of your movie is GREAT!!! I mean, my title is "The Hunger"...not cool, but that's all it COULD be...oh well...

Murphman Studios.

CHOREOGRAPH????? YO DUDE! It's a street fight...it's not a Jackie Chan movie! It's suppose to look raw. What up with all the ego biz on the site still? Haven't we dismissed this crap yet.

"I don't have time for film school...I'm too busy making movies" lol

are u saying the fight scene needs to look better, or its fine, about the choreograph, and this is the other director in "Tears of August". I would just like some input thats all so we can make it better, because as it is we r going to add in a few more clips of the fight scene. And its dark on ur screens just cuz of either bad quality cuz of internet, or u got an LCD screen and u need to turn up ur brightnessnvzublman007@hotmail.com

RP

No man I think the fight scene looks great. The acting of course is a little sketch, but really that is common in student films so don't take it as a critical remark, my actors are amateur also, so no big deal...the fight looks ok though.

If I can give some advice or input though, at least on the trailer. I would add a little more text on black back ground ,really tell what's going on. Yes, yes some will say that you should do this with images but a trailer is suppose to be short and to the point. Which brings me to the next issue...shorten the trailer a bit, just a little more and also I would suggest laying a track of room noise to connect those lines of dialogue with the rest of the trailer. Oh one more thing...let the music ride a little long in the end and by they way, great choice of tunes!!!! Can't wait to see final production! Keep up the good work!

"I don't have time for film school...I'm too busy making movies" lol

I'm not trying to criticize, I'm just saying the fight looked rather...I don't know? I don't mean choreograph like Jackie Chan, I just mean, it seems like you hit record and had them fight. No idea what was going to happen, and it just looked fake. I also don't have th greatest of monitors, so I can't see ALL the little details, but still, from what I could see, it could have been a little better.

Sorry for trying to voice my opinion.

I never said I could do better, I never said it was bad, I just said it looked fake. No hard feelings.

Murphman Studios.

dont worry bout it man, i aprreciate ur opinion. But whats in the trailor is not the whole fight scene, but we are going to redo a little part of it so thanks for your opinion

RP

I'll put some movies up sometime (whenever I get my webspace back) and then you can all critisize me! Sound good?

Murphman Studios.

I am quite impressed with the trailer. I would say that you have a good idea and you have brought it to the audience in an effective way. I think some of your shots are good and the fights sceen is not hollywood quality, that isnt to be expected and people need to realized this. I do have one question. What is the purpose of some of the sceenes appearing blue? Intentional? My screen? I dont quite get that but that could just be my dumb self. I would have to say keep up the good work and nice looking graphics on the website...
Hudson
H Cubed Productions

the blue is a purposely added affect, its something that you just have to watch the whole movie to understand ;-)

RP

[This message was edited by nvzublman007 on March 05, 2003 at 07:57 PM.]

Good trailer. I loved the music...is it your own? The trailer looked dark to me too, so it's probably pretty dark in comparison to other films. Otherwise, very well put together.

Look forward to the real deal.