Hey guys. I'm a very young, inspired movie maker and I'm trying to get better!

I used Sony Vegas for this, but I know I should really spend more of my time in AE and Premiere, since I worked a little with them before.

Please tell me what you think, I know some sound was messed up. Help is appreciated.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NbUOItVVrX0