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here's a short i'm thinking about submitting as the portfolio film for my tisch application (along with a demo reel that will be online shortly) please let me know what you think of it.

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.indiv...l&videoid=1443149611
 
Posts: 50 | Location: San Diego | Registered: September 27, 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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I only watched the first few minutes.

Look, I felt like your character's personality was driven by Ron Burgondy. Everyone likes the humor in "Anchorman", but just the dialoge felt too much like its already been done. Cinematography is the best thing you have going for you in that film.

Good luck.

Tyler


"And whatever you end up doing, love it!"- Alfredo from Cinema Paradiso
 
Posts: 155 | Location: Manhattan | Registered: July 25, 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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I really believe that they won't react well to that. They're big on plot/story and there simply was none.
 
Posts: 24 | Location: LA | Registered: April 11, 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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My favorite part was the car going backwards in the background of that one shot.
 
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thanks guys...

i wasn't initially planning on sending this, but some people that viewed the film and enjoyed it suggested i do so.

instead i'm working on a drama right now that is very character and plot driven, i'd rather not reveal the story for sake of someone stealing the idea or concept.
 
Posts: 50 | Location: San Diego | Registered: September 27, 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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Nothing with nothing. Looks good, but you need a script. Good luck on the drama. Cool
 
Posts: 91 | Location: Long Island, NY | Registered: September 30, 2006Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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