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Gregory D. Goyins
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I am looking for a set of eyes to give me HONEST (read: harsh,critical)feedback on the first draft of my personal essay. It weighs in at a whopping 850 words. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.


"The everyday is so mind-numbing as it is currently being fueled by an inept group of creatives that were spawned into this existence by a society that overwhelmingly embraces spoon-fed philosophies built on a foundation of fad-based truths in hopes of attaining microwave enlightenment."
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I'm up for it. Hit me up at :

thomascd@purdue.edu


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Gregory D. Goyins
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Excellent thanks.


"The everyday is so mind-numbing as it is currently being fueled by an inept group of creatives that were spawned into this existence by a society that overwhelmingly embraces spoon-fed philosophies built on a foundation of fad-based truths in hopes of attaining microwave enlightenment."
----- Me
 
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yuki_iwama@hotmail.com

I don't know if I can offer much help, but I'll read it anyway.


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Send it my way, I'd be happy to give it a gander.

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