How do you all like it?

ummm, ok...so should i change the font or what?

I agree with Big Movie.

Make "Start Screaming" and "This winter" smaller as well.

Personally I would take "This winter" shrink it way down and put it in the lower right hand corner.
Then I would spread out the spacing between the letters of "Start Screaming" and have it go all the way across right through the middle.

Here's another one...any better?

Much better. Maybe get rid of the period at the end of start screaming. Or maybe not, I don't know . . . that's a tough call.

I like where you placed everything much more. It reads left to right a whole lot better.

Maybe replace "This winter" with "Winter 2004"?

I'm not sure on those suggestions, just try 'em and see if you like it.

But good job!

another change...better?

That is really good!

I agree the first one was a little awkward. But I think that the newest version looks really cool!

YAAAAAAAY IT LOOKS GOOD thanks for the help guys

are you gonna upload your film here?

i like the second to last one too

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we arent finished shooting this film yet, but when we are finished, i will try to send it in.

Nice work. I like the coloring of it.

I also agree that the second image is very nice. I would just drop the period and change "this winter" to "winter 2004" like in the last one.

It's just that the font is clearer and brighter in the second version than in the third version.

Anyways, just my two cents. Good luck!

Shunohaku