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I've always aspired to make the first and only X-rated film WITHOUT nudity and skin. Just thinking about what a film like this would look like gets me hard on 
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A retired photographer and ex-seducer takes pictures of women from his apartment window in order to relive his past and fantasies. He rates every woman he photographs on a scale from 1 to 10. His goal: Find the number 10. He finds it. She lives in the apartment across the street. Through his dreams, we see him living with her. One night, he notices strange visitors in dark suits in her apartment. In his fantasies, he fights them off of his number 10. The next day, he receives a visit from an inspector of police responding to complaints from one of the photographer's former "victims". The photographer denies everything. The inspector warns our hero that he knows darn well what he's doing and threatens to turn him in if he continues. He informs the photographer that the woman he's been staring at(#10) is the girlfriend of some mobster the feds have been after for a long time. Inspector offers to let him loose if he should help them gather information on the woman in question's relations with the mobster. Photographer rejects the offer. The next night, photographer watches his number 10(as usual) when he suddenly notices one of the suspicious looking guys, from before, on the floor below, screwing a silencer on top of a gun. A hitman!?! Photographer panics, runs down the stairs of his apartment, cross the street, up the stairs, into number 10's apartment where he defeats the hitman in one dramatic take. Our two heroes in arms. Dramatic Music. #10 moves away from him. She asks "Do I know you?" Cut immediately to CU of photographer. The scene has "faded" from dream to reality. His head is blown off by hitman. Cut to black screen, a woman's screams, more gunshots. The End.
Pitch: Think "Rear Window" meets "Brazil" with a touch of "10" for good measure.
I know this sounds a bit ripped off but trust me, I plan to make it different from those movies in some way. I'm thinking of removing the whole mob plot and aiming for something more psychological. My intention is for the photographer to be the vilain of this story.
It's all a bit muddled in my head now so suggestions are welcome.
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| Posts: 118 | Location: CH | Registered: January 25, 2005 |    |
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quote: Originally posted by Trespasser: I have one about a guy who knows he's going to spontaneously combust within 48 hours, but he doesn't know when, so he goes around, trying to figure out who he should take with him when he explodes. whoa...my 666th post...
That sounds really funny. I can't really think of anything else to say now. Vantango
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| Posts: 64 | Location: Portland,OR | Registered: March 26, 2005 |    |
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wow - trespasser! make it! that sounds fantastic! and hilarious. | PerryKroll.com | TRC | "If not actually disgruntled, he was far from being gruntled." Wodehouse
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| Posts: 5197 | Location: Tisch at New York University | Registered: June 03, 2003 |    |
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quote: Originally posted by Toxie:
Two best friends who have done a lot of good eachother are forced to fight eachother to death. They both recieve bracelets,if they don't fight,the bracelets will explode and then they will die. The fight scene between them is very violent.
That movie has already been made... its called Battle Royale
"Important dialog is only in Hollywood films" - Kyle Phillip Johnson
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| Posts: 1271 | Location: Indiana | Registered: May 23, 2004 |    |
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quote: Originally posted by Tanner Shay: dident he reference it saying its "kind of like battle royale?"
nope
"Important dialog is only in Hollywood films" - Kyle Phillip Johnson
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| Posts: 1271 | Location: Indiana | Registered: May 23, 2004 |    |
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quote: Originally posted by braininabox: quote: Originally posted by Toxie:
Two best friends who have done a lot of good eachother are forced to fight eachother to death. They both recieve bracelets,if they don't fight,the bracelets will explode and then they will die. The fight scene between them is very violent.
That movie has already been made... its called Battle Royale
I actually came up with the idea after i was watching Battle royale  . But the story will be changed somehow.I'm not gonna write a complete rip-off or anything,but as I metioned:It's a tribute to the great japanese filmmakers.
Let's make some art!
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| Posts: 16 | Location: kvål | Registered: March 03, 2005 |    |
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quote: Originally posted by Toxie: I actually came up with the idea after i was watching Battle royale  . But the story will be changed somehow.I'm not gonna write a complete rip-off or anything,but as I metioned:It's a tribute to the great japanese filmmakers.
aah... now I see.
"Important dialog is only in Hollywood films" - Kyle Phillip Johnson
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| Posts: 1271 | Location: Indiana | Registered: May 23, 2004 |    |
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