Hi, if anyone here has this kind of time, take a look at my screenplay. It's pretty much my first attempt at writing, and I need feedback...But the main reason I'm posting this is that I still need an ending for the script. If anyone can think of anything, please email me at quintesnceofdst@netscape.net . Thanks!

here's the script:
http://www.scriptbuddy.com/published/?p=4291527108

the password is: blank (I mean, type the word "blank" --I made it "private" so it wouldn't have to be tested for content on the site, and thus take longer to post)

thanks!!

I'll read it, then I'll see what I can think of.

I have an idea for an ending. Hans
Voightländer had travelled through time using the camera. He was released at the time of Calvin's death. He is testing out new time travel experiments, and has one that may send everyone back in time, which will collapse the space time continuum. The reason for wanting to send everyone back in time, as he believes the British have won the war.

What do you think?

hey, that's great! thanks very much !

PS: Voightländer is the name of the German camera company that made the camera I will be using. Just FYI

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No problem. I think the story is great. Good luck with it.