Hi, ive been working on this last project for a few weeks now and i would like someone to review it and tell me what they think. It is not completly finished, but im almost there, i have all the ideas i just need to finalize.
so if anyone is interested in reading what i have i'd be great

Sent you a belated reply via email. Hope you have it. I think the structure has come a long way, and feels really solid. Just needs a nice end with a twist.

I was thinking in the end the guy seeks out a reading because he is just so confused about love and his own barriers.

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