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Hi everyone, just a quick question. I'm at a point in the script that I'm working on where I need to write a car accident, and am not quite sure how to do it. Do I just explain in a paragraph of description what happens during the accident, or are there any other techniques? Thanks!
 
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Wait... I'm confused. Have you seen a real script? I mean, wouldn't you just go:

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EXT. Country Road - Day.

Without warning, a giant truck plows into Don's tiny car! It flips through the air, smashing against a stand of trees and tumbling down an embankment, until it comes to rest against a stone wall.

The truck screeches to a stop, and nearly jacknives.

INT. Don's Car - Day.

Don opens his eyes. He chokes on the thick smoke, and wipes blood from his forehead.


You can also say:

INT/EXT Don's Car/Country Road - Day and not have to re-slug.


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Haha, yea I've seen a real script. Just not sure how to write this scene, since there's a whole bunch of stuff to be shown inside the car while it's happening. Thanks though.
 
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Ah yes. That's where the INT/EXT slugline comes in handy. Then you can switch between action inside and out without having to re-slug, and it's totally obvious to the reader what's going on anyway. After all, novels don't say "meanwhile, OUTSIDE the car..."


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Do what you're going to do. Articulate as much as you feel you need to to visually express what you seen in your mind. There's always redrafting to trim the fat.
 
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