It's only about 10 pages and consists mostly of dialouge. I'd love some critism and advice if you could take the time. Here it is:
http://www.geocities.com/jumar1987/SunshineSeeds-Ver1.html

If you want to read the short story it was based on:
http://gamingw.net/forums/showthread.php?t=22435

I liked it a lot. With the right actors you could really pull this off. It was different from most films or scripts i've read, nothing drug related or ending with suicide. Some of the dialogue was awkward and didn't seem like it would come across well on screen, but you can work on that. Otherwise, nice job.