I've done a ton of rewriting on my first script, and I'd like you all to read it and tell me what you think. You can find it on Script Buddy at http://www.scriptbuddy.com/community/?p=4291528691. To get to the script, enter the password "Celeste" (the main character's name). Make sure the C is capital. Thanks in advance.
- Matt

Some of the dialog is fairly convincing, but I felt it dragged. It didn't keep my interest. If I was watching it online I'd have stopped after the first minute or three.