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ok..for a short idea i have it starts with a friend going to his friends house to drive him to the train station, they have an argument about the fact he has to leave for school and lost the girl he loves and wanted to be with her, his friend convinces him to look at the best of the picture, and just remember the good times...
he goes to the train station then?????

one ending i thought about is : maybe the argument with the friend makes him realize he is being selfish in his sorrow and **** and he should just be thankful for the time he shared with his girl so while he's sitting at the train station he calls and leaves her a message thanking her for the time they shared etc etc. and she's standing behind him while he's leaving it and he doesn't k now


any different suggestions for an ending to this short?


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Posts: 153 | Location: NEWW YOOOOOOOOOOOOOORK | Registered: August 08, 2004Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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i think the guy should set it up so his g/f thinks he cheated on her, even though he didn't. Just to make it easier for her to dump him and she kicks the **** out of him so that he can feel like he will never say "what if" and get stuck spending the rest of his life looking at every girl he sees walking the streets to wonder if its her cause hed rather it not be her, cause shed beat him up again. It's like hurting urself to help others. and then hed be stuck at the sation and hed be all beat up and his friend would think he cheated on his g/f too and it would be easy to say goodbye cause theres nothing left in his relationships since he fuct it up. now he can start clean. thats how i would do it
 
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i kinda dont want any interaction with the guy and girl, its kinda like his departure to a new life...


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Posts: 153 | Location: NEWW YOOOOOOOOOOOOOORK | Registered: August 08, 2004Reply With QuoteEdit or Delete MessageReport This Post
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