We've done this before - but let's try it again. You know what to do.
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EXT. LAKE DOCK.
SAM, 19, sits on the end of the dock, dangling his feet over the edge, his toes barely touching the water.
It's a beautiful summer day in the woodsy lake country midwest. The water beautifully reflects the sparse clouds above. The only other living creature on the lake is a loon off in the distance which makes her call and then gracefully dives under the surface only to appear a couple hundred yards away.
SAM begins to hear footsteps walking down the dock towards him.
If you decide to jump into the water and swim frantically, turn to page 6.
If you decide to turn around and face the source of the creepy footsteps, turn to page 13.
Oh...it's...we're doing something else...my bad
Sam turns his head languidly and catches a glimpse of LARENA, 18, walking towards him. She sits down beside him and stares into the distance. After a few silent moments Larena turns to Sam.
LARENA You know Indians used to live here. They called the lake Wo'okeyeh Ejau. It means "peaceful water." Eventually they moved out, others moved in and the name sort of just got lost. I guess everything loses it's meaning eventually.
Sam looks lost in thought for a moment, absent-mindedly tapping the water with his toes. He then turns to Larena.
SAM Why are you here anyway?
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SAM No. You take abuse from that man everyday and you never have anything negative to say about him.
LARENA Well that's because I know It's not his fault.
SAM Come again...?
LARENA Sam we come here every summer, this little cabin is our home away from home, It's where you and me became who we are.
SAM What's that got to do with dad hitting you?
LARENA Nothing, that's what I think about to help me get through every moment being here. I figure if I paint a nice picture in my head maybe everything around us wont be so bad... Come on!!! lets go swimming.
Larena hops up on both feet, then dives into the water. A moment passes...nothing.
SAM Larena!?... Larena where are you?
After glancing over the lake Sam finally sees Larena's lifeless body rise to the top of the water. Sam wastes no time and jumps in after Larena.
INT. BEDROOM-NIGHT SAM's eyes shoot open. His pupils shrink in the darkness. His shaky, damp hands move across the bed sheets, searching. They touch his WIFE'S skin. She lies next to him, asleep. He is much older now, maybe in his early forties.
SAM (hoarse whisper) Larena... You...
WIFE (asleep) Mmmyeah... Sammmm... Who...?
SAM I...I don't know what it is, I don't know...
He swallows hard, dry saliva.
SAM I thought she was... But you're not...I... I don't know what is was. It was a dream. It was a dream, but it felt...it felt so real, I...
His WIFE lies peacefully in front of him, her chest softly heaving up and down in her slumber. SAM bows his head in self-defeat. The tangible world he had just left was but an abstraction. It's quite evident now that he is safe in bed.
SAM pulls the sheets from his body and climbs off the mattress.
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INT. KITCHEN--MOMENTS LATER SAM rummages through the refridgerator. He pulls out a gallon of milk and pours it into a glass he finds drying in the rack next to the sink. A blizzard storms outside the kitchen window. He stares at it for awhile, sipping at the milk. He is still noticeably tense, as the image of LARENA'S cold, lifeless body flashes through his mind. He clenches his head, wipes away the cold sweat...
WE INCH closer to him, too close...he throws the glass against the kitchen counter. It shatters into a million pieces.
He stares out the window as snow rushes by. Slowly, the bitter storm begins to fade and the scenery changes back to the wooded grandeur of the beginning scene. The window disappears...the fantasy molds into reality.
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EXT. WOODED AREA--DAY They are young again. LARENA lifts a wooden cup from inside the well bucket. She walks over to a tree stump where SAM sits and pours it into his mouth. He grins at her, truly elated. She kisses his forehead, then moves his fingers over her swollen belly.
LARENA It's everything there's ever been, isn't it? It's the most beautiful thing in the world...
SAM's face grows solemn.
SAM Please, Larena... Don't stay here... With the way things are now, please don't stay.
She looks at the ground as if about to cry.
LARENA I can't leave his father... I can't leave him like me...without a father...
SAM Please, Larena... Please, he isn't real. He isn't good,he isn't real, he's not...
SAM stares at her with hard eyes.
SAM You know he won't care about this baby anymore than he cares about you now.
LARENA looks up from the ground with her face masked in happiness.
LARENA Did you like the water? It was good, wasn't it?
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LARENA (faintly in the distance) Did you like the water? It was good, wasn't it? Did you like the good? It was water, wasn't it Did you good the water? It was like, wasn't it? etc.
Sam looks in paranoia at the surrounding well which has become coated in green floppy mushrooms that sway and float erratically, and eerily alive. A dense cloud of yellow mist rises from the well and curls out in tiny tendrils. Sam looks at his cup of water, and sees some dark object float lazily to the surface, he realizes that it is Larena's lifeless body, he drops the cup, and it shatters into a million pieces
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INT - Kitchen
Sam is back at the kitchen counter, with the shards of his glass lying fragmented in a puddle of milk that drips slowly and rhythmically off of the counter to the ceramic tile in soft DRIPS
The CRUNCHING of springs is heard, as his wife gets out of bad and groggily leans against the doorpost on the opposite side of the room. Wife rubs her eyes
WIFE What are you doing Sam?
Wife yawns and rubs eyes. Sam looks at his wife, eyes wide in fright.
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INT. PISSAT--MORNING SAM sits next to FAT MIKE. MIKE is his freind, but MIKE id also fat, so everyone calls him Fat Mike. It is what it is. They drive. SAM lets go of the wheel for a moment to crank down the window and light a cigarette.
SAM This screenplay's killin' me, Fat Mike. It's f*ckin' killin' me, I'm dying.
FAT MIKE Yeah, well... You know...
SAM It's just the ideas, the ideas. I can't sleep, I'm constantly thinking, but it's all sh*t, right? You know? Nothing's good enough... It's not profound...or it's too profound... I had this dream about some hillbilly girl with a broken jaw jumping into a lake... I mean what is that?
FAT MIKE Doesn't smell like sundance...
SAM Well I wasn't aware it had a smell, Fat Mike. What does it smell like to you? Bacon?
FAT MIKE You know, i don't think it's funny when you do that. Say things like that... I don't think it's funny. This stature isn't a choice for most people.
SAM Yea, most people, but what about you? You work out and stuff? You eat mcsalads instead of mcshakes?
FAT MIKE catches a McDonalds out of the corner of his eys as they speed through town. SAM clenches the wheel.
SAM I broke a glass today... Threw this glass of milk and it shattered into a million pieces. (beat) It dripped umm... Dripped... You know...dripped slowly, rhythmically...in soft drips... (beat) Got all over the f*ckin' place.
FAT MIKE You didn't throw it away though, did you?
SAM Throw what away?
FAT MIKE The milk... You didn't dump it out? You didn't let it go to waste?
SAM takes a drag and stares at him as if he were from outer space.
FAT MIKE What?? You could've...put it on your... ...put it on your cereal...
FAT MIKE's voice fades slowly into silence. He looks down at his lap, ashamed.
FAT MIKE You think you know all the answers...
SAM You think you look good naked.
FAT MIKE No I don't...
SAM Well there you go.
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CUT TO: EXT. SIDE OF THE ROAD Fat Mike stands over SAM's dead body, blood drips from his mouth and there is hatchet in SAM's head. CUT TO: INT. PASSAT SAM awakes from yet another day dream.
SAM Hey Fat Mike, are you hungry? You wanna grab some McDonald's? Wendy's? Denny's? Chuck E. Cheese?... (mumbling) My left leg...
FAT MIKE What?
SAM What's up?
FAT MIKE Hmm?
SAM You say something Mike?
FAT MIKE No. I mean yeah. I mean...What the f*ck!?
"Fuc*ing Fascist!"
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