I've finally finished the first draft of the script Ive been whining about for the past 2 months ( or more). It's 74 and a half pages and quite a HUGE HUGE HUGE mess. It needs a lot of shortening and I need some major opinions and tips opn how people should think I should shorten it (If scenes should be moved, condensed, deleted, or even added). If you have the patience to read an amateur's 75 page screenplay, please reply with your email and Ill send it. Thanks.

Hey my name is Aaron Hornstein, ive made tons and tons of short films, and 4 our currently resided in film festivls around the USA. Id Be more than happy to read ur Screenpaly, and give it soem feedback.

Ajh@cox.net