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well I think the whole idea needs to be changed if you plan to have some wacky twist. long scenes involving music being built up is played out to death. that ****s for hollywood (and TV). you gotta be able to come up with something better and more creative. maybe its a girl, before she takes her morning pill she's really unhappy, but once she takes it she feels good, then we see her dancing through the forest, talking to trees, then she starts talking to a little squirrel, "hey there mr. fuwz-E tayol!" and then, outta nowhere the squirrel kills her with a weird absract weapon you made from **** you found in your backyard.
it'd be pretty weird, especially if the squirrel is like a guy in a mascot costume.
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| Posts: 3923 | Location: Sacramento, CA | Registered: July 21, 2003 | |
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quote: Originally posted by Kyle Johnson:
well I think the whole idea needs to be changed if you plan to have some wacky twist. long scenes involving music being built up is played out to death. that ****s for hollywood (and TV). you gotta be able to come up with something better and more creative. maybe its a girl, before she takes her morning pill she's really unhappy, but once she takes it she feels good, then we see her dancing through the forest, talking to trees, then she starts talking to a little squirrel, "hey there mr. fuwz-E tayol!" and then, outta nowhere the squirrel kills her with a weird absract weapon you made from **** you found in your backyard.
it'd be pretty weird, especially if the squirrel is like a guy in a mascot costume.
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| Posts: 99 | Location: Tennessee | Registered: March 16, 2005 | |
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Not knowing what the rest of the story is, makes it tough to come up with something. How about he's standing there, you see his reaction to being shot (but no gunshot sound), then a few seconds later he hears the shot and slumps to the ground (the bullet travelled faster than the sound). Hunters mistook him for deer (or something) and try to cover up the murder, but the group is diverse in their opinions - some want to cover it up, some want to go to the police, etc. It's probably been done a million times before!
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| Posts: 864 | Location: Greensboro NC USA | Registered: December 19, 2002 | |
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quote: Originally posted by Mark M:
Not knowing what the rest of the story is, makes it tough to come up with something.
How about he's standing there, you see his reaction to being shot (but no gunshot sound), then a few seconds later he hears the shot and slumps to the ground (the bullet travelled faster than the sound). Hunters mistook him for deer (or something) and try to cover up the murder, but the group is diverse in their opinions - some want to cover it up, some want to go to the police, etc.
It's probably been done a million times before!
Yeah, I think it has. It was pretty funny in Hot Shots.
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| Posts: 64 | Location: Portland,OR | Registered: March 26, 2005 | |
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Weird! I had no idea that bullets went faster than 1,116 feet/second. You learn something new every day. I looked it up, and some seem to go as fast as 4000 fps  | PerryKroll.com | TRC | "If not actually disgruntled, he was far from being gruntled." Wodehouse
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| Posts: 5197 | Location: Tisch at New York University | Registered: June 03, 2003 | |
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quote: Originally posted by Mark M:
I figured it had somewhere. I haven't seen HOT SHOTS though! The gun shot thing (without sound) I saw in an old western where guys were shooting at each other from across a canyon. It was pretty good!
Yeah it's really stupid in a funny way. It's a parody of Top Gun with Charlie Sheen. It's not the most....*cough*...intelligent movie ever but it's still hilarious.
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| Posts: 64 | Location: Portland,OR | Registered: March 26, 2005 | |
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