I have a cut down 7 page script for a darkly humored thriller called: WORSE THAN A BAD HAIR DAY. It could easily be stretched just a tad (with the clothing swap scene) if you want to add an extra two minutes or so out of it. It's a single interior setting and one basic outdoor street scene. Fun to do. Let me know if you'd like a copy of the script sent to you.

Again, credit and a copy is all I need for this one.

Synopsis:

Opening scene involves a tough dressed street-girl type (I’ll call her Rita) talking on a cell phone. Through the conversation, we learn she’s on the run from a drug deal gone bad and is hiding out in a house in a new development and plans to crash there for awhile.

The conversation is interrupted when a lady real estate agent comes in. The tough girl jumps the agent, makes her shed her clothes down to undies. Rita can hence get a change of wardrobe and go back out on the street to get away.

The agent is shut into a closet but soon gets out and has nothing to wear except Rita’s street girl outfit. The woman reluctantly dresses in the shabby attire, heads out onto the street, totally unaware that a couple of punk thugs are looking for the real Rita and instead mistake the innocent agent for the drug dealing baddy.

They drive up along side her and pop her off with a gun or, if you don’t want to use a gun, just have her grabbed and thrown in the trunk of the car to be driven off somewhere and drowned.

Yours for the asking.

Megan
meganmyers2004@yahoo.co.uk

That is almost too dark in my opinion. Maybe if the real estate agent had been a total ***** to someone earlier in the film it would not seem as bad when an innocent lady is beaten up, stripped of her clothes, locked in a wardrobe and then killed. Maybe its just me but I think that is really not a humurous plot at all (and thats coming from someone who thought Kangaroo Jack was funny!)
I did however like the scene with the woman getting undressed. Maybe you could just extend this scene and cut out the rest.
Anyway, good luck with the story. Hope someone decides to make it.