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MDizzy
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Hi, I just finished writing my first short screenplay. It is only 9 pages. If anyone would like to read it and give me some feedback it would be greatly appreciated. PM me and I can send you the PDF. Thanks in advance!

Oh yeah, it has zombies!
 
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Gregory D. Goyins
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SHOOT ME AN EMAIL!!!!
 
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braininabox
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I would love to read through your screenplay.

Hit me up at:

thomascd@purdue.edu


I'll try to get some detailed feedback to you as soon as I can.


"Important dialog is only in Hollywood films" - Kyle Phillip Johnson
 
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MDizzy
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Wow thanks for the interest guys! I emailed a copy to both of you.
 
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Lestatinator
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I would love to review your screenplay, if you like? Besides... zombies are a specialty of mine. Wink

E-mail is: the_vampire_lestat09@msn.com

Good luck with your work!
Kim
 
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MDizzy
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Thanks I've sent an email to you also.
 
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MDizzy
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Hey I updated the script and rewrote the ending if anyone would like to read over it. Also, braininabox did you ever get the original one.
 
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erizo
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MDizzY, I would like a copy.

suspect0zero@hotmail.com
 
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MDizzy
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quote:
suspect0zero@hotmail.com

Thanks erizo. I've sent you a copy too.
 
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Gregory D. Goyins
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SHOOT ME AGAIN!!!!


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Race_Bannon
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MDizzy, send me one as well. The more feedback the better, right?
My email is: nicholaswsnyder@gmail.com
 
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MarkChristmas
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Send me an email too
 
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MDizzy
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Wow thanks. I've shot an email to all three of you guys.
 
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Moises Hernandez
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Send me a copy of that script please.

moises08@gmail.com


"The greatest risk you'll ever take is not taking one at all."
 
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1nk
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hey id love to read your screenplay man. send me a copy at:

prakash.venkatraman@gmail.com
 
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MDizzy
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I sent an email to both you guys.
 
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blacksundays
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mdizz whats it about? you planning on shooting it?
 
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MistaQyou
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... I'd love to read it... mista-breeze@hotmail.com
 
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RyanMar
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send that!

ryanmaringas@gmail.com


Want a Film, Script, Screenplay, or Storyboard reviewed? Email me @ ryanmaringas@gmail.com

PM Me if you're looking for someone to draw your storyboard
 
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