thats why i said FANTASY, its a genre you know

Make the movie you wanna make, somebody'll like it, even if its just you, which is all good ya no. That being said, I myself didnt really like this, just for the fact that theres no story. A film is not an event, its got an arc to the characters, at least a narrative film does. Experimentals, if they're just being made as experimentals defeats the purpose, cause they're supposed to show a purpose, they have to convey a meaning and a kind of inner beauty. In the case of this film, I'm not sure I understood it, if you would mind explaining, like in detail, that'd be swell. Also, the breaking cross does kind of allude to a religions unertone, but that's just what I got. Overall, I'd suggest to try working in some kind of purpose to show this. Thanks for listening.

i wouldnt limit a film to a genre. or a narrative structure. or any one underlying meaning.

all film is experimental even if you got a budget of 60 mill. There's no set way to do it (though emulating hollywood/traditional/retarded formulas seem to be the IN thing to do, aswell something in later careers with more money)

as for your script, GODFATHER...
as is I dont think its that interesting. Anything you're trying to say is presented too clearly. I'd rework some of your ideas and maybe go nuts in making lots more symbology as to hide your intentions.

old thread alert!!

haha...May.

Yeah, shoulda looked at the date. haha

lol yes old post
film is in post production now