Hey. This is my longest script I've ever written. And I'm actually hoping to make this into a series if this does well. It's just a rough draft, so the dialogue is VERY straight forward and to the point, so I'm still editing it right now. But I'd like to hear what you all might have to say, because I plan on shooting this thing next month. Anyway, here it is.

script: red rising

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...nobody?

Hey, Killswitch I did a quick read through and sounded pretty cool. Alot of it seemed to be similar to Red Dawn premise wise, but I like how the story seems to be filled with quite a bit of action.

Things do progess quite quickly, and I think you need to beef up both the middle and ending with not only additional time, but perhaps another loop in the story/event.

Thanks, I plan on adding a scene or two, just to add time if nothing else. I know its a little too close to Red Dawn, but its really quite different. Red Dawn was about action, mine is about suspense, and also I'm not going to say who the invaders are...
But since this is a potential series...if all goes well...I'm prolly going to veer off into the land of action movies.