Well its not really a script its just a design i have thrown together, just after as much feedback as i get before i go and put money into it.
If you've any detailed comments, suggestions, critisism and/or questions send them too ntherkelsen@mac.com

Last Resort

Thanks heaps
Nick

Sounds like you've really thought about this. You've got all the cinematography you need and all the events, just put it into a script and this sounds pretty good.