Hey everyone, my name is Daniel Bury I am thinking about entering my short film "Reality Check" in some student film festivals. However, I am sure that there are a ton of things that I could improve on before entering it. If you have time, please watch my film and let me know if you have any constructive criticism or tips on what I could change to make it better. Thanks!

The film is posted on this site at:
http://www.studentfilms.com/film/get.do?id=1149

Hey Daniel

I found this site about a week ago. Reality Check was the first film I watched on the website and I really enjoyed it. The idea was very original. There aren't very many things I can suggest for you to improve on, which is a good thing, but one thing that really caught my eye was the acting, especially the mother's. The part where she looked at her watch and left, that was embarassing to watch lol. But really, I loved your movie and I look foward to seeing more.

One of the few films i've seen on SF that kept me wanting to know whats next. Acting by mother not so crash hot. But a fantastic piece!