This is our first short film, please let me know what you think of it.
You can view it on my site RedFrogs.com.
It's called "Hiding Places".

Any feedback is much appreciated

Thanks
Jeremy
RedFrogs.com

My favorite hiding place is in the hall closet, they never find me there in games of hide and go seek

Naw man, it's all about the "behind the shower curtain in the bathroom" trick. Make sure the curtain isn't see-through tho.

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Make sure the curtain isn't see-through tho.

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God knows I've been burned on that one

I actually liked it. I think the tension you built up was good. I think you had good actors. She acted scared pretty good.

I noticed that it was pretty much one shot am I right? I think you could have utilized the child's fears a little more with reaction shots.

All in all I enjoyed it. Keep it up!