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Hey peeps, my movie Dark Deception, has just been posted. I just wanted some critics on it so feel free. Thanks.
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real corny, lol- i mean the guy starts halluncinating and "freaking out (man!)" like- ten seconds after they find the dead girl (not that i wouldn't be freaked out, but things like halluncinations take time)

the cinematography was fine though- like it wasn't annoying- (cou*most films on this site*gh)
 
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Wow you guys are rough, But I hear ya hey it's my first, and if was that good i would be worried why I'm not in hollywood yet. Thanks for the review.....


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I reviewed it on site as Tymm Tim, I was lurker at the time, I liked it, but the characters just needed more time for developement like just so the audience can relate to them more.


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Ya I agree it's just so hard when your crew is your cast. I don't know how many times I was actually looking at thin air for most of those scenes. I really didn't have something to work off of just like my buddy Brice. I'm not playing, Brice and I shot edited lit the whole thing. We had some help on the cliff scene, thats about it. So the movie did suffer cause of that. But thanks for the review.


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Ya I agree it's just so hard when your crew is your cast. I don't know how many times I was actually looking at thin air for most of those scenes. I really didn't have something to work off of just like my buddy Brice. I'm not playing, Brice and I shot edited lit the whole thing. We had some help on the cliff scene, thats about it. So the movie did suffer cause of that. But thanks for the review.


You're welcome, your lighting was good. Like I said in the review I liked it, I want to see more, so keep 'em comming.


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Thanks I appreciate it. Working on another script hopefully soon.


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