Hey there.

We made a short film last month. Just got around to compressing the file..

It's quick time and about 29mb.


http://homepage.ntlworld.com/pauline.bogdanovich/Killer%20Instinct%20(2005).mov

I would love to hear what you guys think.

Here are a few grabs I took while editing.















Despin out.

Nice shots there! Especially the one from inside the window looking across at the other house!

I do need to tell you that linking to movies hosted on other serves is not considered a great thing. Once is alright, but you must understand that it takes support away from this site, because the free forums are supported by the paid movie hosting.

Hosting here on SF.com is really cheap too, you should consider it Its about $10, or $1 per minute per year.

Hey it looks like you got some good stuff there, judging by your grabs. The link is dead though...

yo help you out, you need to go here and then click the link.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/pauline.bogdanovich

Cool short...What format did you shoot it on?

Hey that was an enjoyable short! You had some very respectable cinematography goin' on. The editing was also pretty slick. Also some cool foreshadowing there with the knife imagery. Good work!

Couple ideas: The sequence with the intruder's POV nearing the end seemed just a smidget too long... it didn't seem to build to the climax as much as it could have

and, the music at the climax, I feel if it picked up a little, and got just a bit more intense, it would benefeit the scene greatly.

Just some consructive criticism stuff! Sweet film!