I want this to be my logo, what do you think?
http://www.jerryvannimwegen.nl/test/index.html

(dont pay attention to the text)

Its not for a busness, but for promoting my own website. So its not a real company, but more a trademark.

Ofcourse, in the field of video/film.

Whats that picture supposed to be, exactly?

that is not a good sign if you have to ask...

Its a person on a stair climing up (to the sky?)

I got that it was a guy climing, but it's still a bit confusing. I do like the simplicity of it. The black and white color scheme and circle-composition is nice. It would just be better if the figure was a BIT more defined.

Hard to explain without drawing it out, but I think it would look better if the guy was kind of arched out away from the ladder or whatever a bit more. Create some negative space between him and the stair. I like the overall concept.

I agree with politicsofecstacy. That's exactly what the logo needs. The negative will make it more obvious what it is, and less of a blob.

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Originally posted by politicsofecstacy:
Hard to explain without drawing it out, but I think it would look better if the guy was kind of arched out away from the ladder or whatever a bit more. Create some negative space between him and the stair. I like the overall concept.

I get the point, and i think you are absolutly right!

I will use this logo as a concept logo, and i will, as soon as i have time, look if i can make a better logo. I am not so good in drawing etc... In fact, this is a REAL person on a REAL ladden in front of a greenscreen!!

So, iam not sure how to handle this, but thanks for the input. The general opinion is (correct me if i am wrong) "The idea is good, the logo looks nice, BUT: it needs more work to look like a man on a ladder" and your suggestion is... well, it sounds just what it needs.

Thanks, to all of you!

Ow, one more thing, what do you think of my website?? (it not done, only the videopage "Me knuffeltje" is working) but what about the style?