I made film "blame puberty" for senior project, any tips and suggestions criticisms or advice? thanks.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FnORsLlwiWw

That was so...so...unconventional?
Perhaps that is the right word...

i thought this was great, but the ending was such a lame way out... i think with a better ending, and better production values this would be dope like soap on a rope!

haha yeah i know ...the camera broke the day i was gonna shoot the last scenes so i did kinda look for an easy way out with the stock footage

Ok.... I couldn't make it through more then a minute of that. The humor is pretty juvenile, the technique could use a lot of work, and ...why?

Aside from the sound design, though, there are a few good cuts that feed your... purpose...