Actually, you're right

I am saying it about once a day! lol. But its an easy mistake to make, because most people just search around for places to show off their stuff and don't think of the fact that there could be a rule against it. What I SHOULD do is type one up, and keep it in a file on my desktop, so I don't have to rewrite it every time I need it

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Ok, as promised here I am to tell you what I thought of your movie. It grabbed me right away because of the odd filming style, quirky music and wide angle lens. And the cool english (cockney?) accent helped too

The editing was what I didn't like. Several times it seemed like a take had gone badly, but you'd used it anyway, or cut it too long, or too short. I understand you made it in 20 minutes, so I can't pick on stuff like that TOO much

One time I saw white socks, presumably on the feet of the camera man, as he went in for a closeup on the fallen burglar. I think I saw some sort of equipment at the bottom of the stairs in one shot too, but I couldn't be sure. The ending felt a bit lame; maybe it would have worked the way it was, if some kind of exciting thing had happened. Like him being chased out.
Anyway, all in all, a very fun film. And considering its being done in 20 minutes, very good!
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