i recently participated in a high school film festival (i got 3rd place, there were about 50 ppl, and i was one of the only freshmans there and i beat most seniors, i want to pursue this in a career) and would really like to get some feedback. it is my first film:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yF_vZ7Oj3_4
*NOTE*- It is best viewed on "High Quality"

all feedback, both positve and negative, is appreciated